Rosalie Peyton TS#5 Tania

I met with Tania during her lunch hour. After our last session, I had her write a short essay about her new apartment. During this session, I discussed the content and structure of her essay with her. We talked about Pro and Con essays and the way that they are typically structured. She will work on her essay for her next session. I will then talk with her about the grammar mistakes within her writing. I gave her a copy of the editing symbols that I will use so that she will have an idea of what I will be looking at. I also discussed comma usage with her, as I noticed there were several errors regarding commas in her essay. Having a sample of her writing to look at is very helpful to see the sort of errors that she commonly makes. This gives me an idea of what sort of things we should work on in later sessions.