Colleen TS 4-Soyoung

This morning and this evening (depending on where in the world you were) Soyoung and I Skyped for a tutorial session.  We are working on a three part writing lesson plan. Today was part two.  Over the week she had gathered references concerning the topic 'Gun Control'.  Today she freewrote sentences to begin to fill in her essay. She took 20 minutes to do this, then I read the outline she had written and gave her structural feedback.  Over the next week she will fill in more detail in her essay and send me a second draft on 29th March.  I will review this for any grammatical errors or other necessary feedback.  We will review this draft together on 31 March.  She will then have over night to do a final revision, I will give her a summative assessment based on the CIES rubric during the first week in April.