Colleen TS 5- Soyoung

Today we reviewed the writing style of critique and how to plan for writing. Over the last two weeks Soyoung has produced a 4 paragraph essay on Gun Control in the USA. Last evening I had evaluated her second draft and given her feedback.  At the beginning of today's session I introduced the topic of transition devices with an exercise using prepared sentences that could be linked in this way. Soyoung did the exercise then spent 30 minutes working on her essay.  We then reviewed the work that she produced in the 30 minutes and I gave her some additional feedback, Ok, I nit picked!  I gave her the CIES rubric for written papers and we agreed that I would give her a summative evaluation of her final draft based on this rubric when she submits her essay on Wednesday.